Friday, 7 March 2014

100 WC week 24

There once was there was 3 little pigs one built his house out of straw the next one built his house out of sticks and the last one built his out of bricks. Then one day the big bad wolf came to the straw house and walked through the wall and ate the pig. He then did the same to the stick house. He came to the brick house he walk through the door. He saw the pig sitting on a chair with a flamethrower. The pig pulled the trigger the house erupted in white flames.

By Luke

1 comment:

  1. Wow! What a surprise! I wanted to know whether the piggie got away, or was he burnt up too? I hope he got away!

    Well done on your writing. Did you read it through carefully? Read the first sentence - can you spot a couple of mistakes that need fixing?

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