Thursday, 13 March 2014

100 Word Challenge EW

February 17 3014 (or 2014), I'm Alice. I am in a attic ,alone. I’ve Been here for six months. I’ve had no food, blankets or water for 6 months. I was at school, it was recess and I was playing zorg zip bug with Rachel and Casey when suddenly a trashcan started to shake so we went to see what was going on. Then we heard a voice inside the trashcan saying “help", Rachel slowly walked over and said “I’ll lift up the lid” but when she lifted up the lid in the blink of a second I landed here.

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  1. I liked the writing. Need to proof read it again because there are some extra capital letters that do not need to be there. but I do like it because it is different and also because it was from a persons perspective

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