Friday, 7 March 2014

Bailey's Explanation

1 comment:

  1. Your title makes it clear what I shall be reading about in your explanation. The paragraphs flow well and you have used some good causal connectives. The diagram helps your explaantion. I would have liked more specific information about the sun's rays. On the whole, a great effort.I thought this was researched well with lots of extra information.

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