Monday, 10 March 2014

Emma's Explanation - What would happen if we had no moon?

1 comment:

  1. A good clear introduction that leads the reader into the whole explanation. Your explanation was organised logically; I would only question whether your impacts on nature could have been added on to each separate paragraph. Good use of the technical language and connectives. I liked the video being included; remember diagrams are there to support the text though.