Friday, 7 March 2014

Lewis' Day and Night Explanation

1 comment:

  1. You have included a clear title. Your paragraphs are detailed and very well researched. I can see some evidence of causal connectives but the time ones are harder to find; it was a hard task to include them though. Diagrams are used to supprt your text. On the whole a good explanation for day and night - well done!