Monday, 10 March 2014

Lupo's Tides Information

1 comment:

  1. A great introduction. This set up the reader to know exactly what they were going to read. You managed to include huge amounts of information here. You need to focus on how you order your ideas and paragraphs. I found it hard to find examples of causal connectives and there were no diagrams - both key parts of an explanation.

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