Friday, 7 March 2014

My explanation on how tides work

1 comment:

  1. Your title was clear. Your introduction was simbple but maybe a little brief. The paragraphs flow together well in a logical sequence. I felt the time and causal connectives needed to be more evident.. Good use of diagrams and well done for referencing them. Your conclusion was excellent. Check carefully for punctuation.

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