Friday, 7 March 2014

Seyahs Explanation

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  1. A simple but effective title started this explanation. Your introduction was clear and to the point. Your paragraphs flow together well and it is clear you have done some careful reasearch. It was hard to find the causal connectives that you were asked to include and there were no diagrams. These are essential parts of an explanation.

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