Friday, 21 March 2014

Jack's 100 word challenge week 26

                                 


I am 6 and I was in my bath all alone. except my rubber ducky of course. when suddenly two great big brown blobs blobbed towards us. We did not know where they came from all that we knew was they were not friendly.
just then I got an idea, I could slip away from them than run. That's what I did I grabbed my ducky and quickly slipped to the side. I got out, luckily but look up suddenly can you see one of the blobs were jumping with us. I quickly pulled the plug and they slipped down the mystical and mysterious dark , dirty, hole


              

1 comment:

  1. HI Jack,
    A very imaginative piece of writing.
    You need to be careful to use capital letters to start your sentences.
    Well done for entering this weeks 100 Word Challenge!
    Mrs Symonds (Team 100WC)
    Linton, Cambridge

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