Thursday, 13 March 2014

Xiaomin's 100WC Week 25

Down in the woods there lived a sweet little girl, her name was Emma. One night Emma had someone knocking at her door; she tip toed to the door and gently opened it. She found a little package just sitting there; she picked it up but when she lifted the lid… out jumped a rabbit. It had fluffy ears and a tiny nose she decided to name it Rosy. Sometimes Emma would water the garden and Rosy would always follow her.One night Rosy ran away, Emma was really upset she tried to find Rosy but she just couldn't….

1 comment:

  1. Hi Xiaomin - what a sad story you've written for this week's 100WC. Despite it being sad I think it's really good, I like how you've used some good vocabulary and how you've saturated your sentences in different ways
    Su Harris (Team 100WC Suffolk, UK)