Friday, 4 April 2014

Anzac cinquain poem by Anna

Anzac
              Red,blood                 
Sobbing, shooting,slaughtering
Dreadful ,sorrowful,filled with rage,heartbroken
War

     


picture take by Crown Copyright 2011, NZ Defence Force

2 comments:

  1. See me to work on formatting this to make it look a bit nicer on the page.

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  2. This now looks heaps better. You chose some very adventurous and powerful words to create imagery here. Well done.

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