Friday, 9 May 2014

100Word Challenge Week 31

One day in town of Toyville there was a bee lying in the middle of tree street. Citizens
called the police station and stared at the creature.
After about five minutes the police arrived and took a look at the still bee,They took photographs and checked for breathing and a pulse and confirmed it dead. Meanwhile at ToyCorp (A lab) they invented a reviving fluid in a syringe. They sent it over to the crime scene and injected it into the bee, hooray! the bee has awoken, and flew past all the tiny houses and into the gloomy sunset.

By James

1 comment:

  1. A very imaginative response to the prompt James. I liked the way you included sadness, then hope, then happiness all within 100 words. You used some very effective vocabulary to add interest to your writing.
    Keep up the great work!
    Nicola Richardson, team 100wc, Tyne and Wear, UK