Thursday, 15 May 2014

Alex H's 100wc

Some of the words sounded like a foreign language. Then I relised that the conversation was part English part French. “Bonjour, can we continue this conversation inside that building,” I say pointing to an old dilapidated building. “Yeah sure thing.” We entered the building. I tell them how on the way I was being followed and I didn't want them to find me so that’s why I made us move into this less suspicious looking building. At that moment five people busted through the door and yelled “We’re the police! The group turned around, ran like a cheetah, out the back door and were never found.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alex,
    I love this writing and I am going to recommend it for the Showcase this week. You have worked the prompt really well into your text rather than just adding it on because you have to! I like some of the descriptive words you have used to create interest too. Great effort.
    Keep writing and sharing,
    Mary (Team 100WC)
    Australia

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