Thursday, 15 May 2014

Bailey's 100wc

Week 32

The pod began to reveal the wrinkled creature inside. The pink Martian was coated in a thick layer of slime and its lengthy black fingernails were covering his wide radiant eyes. The small alien began to speak and some of the words sounded like a foreign language from another country.
“Earth is in great danger”
Its eyelids began to shut. The small Martian was tremulously exhausted and its egg sized heart would stop beating very soon. Medics and scientists packed into narrow room. I was pushed into the corridor and forced to look through the telescope after seeing a bright glare. I couldn’t believe my eyes. The war had started...

1 comment:

  1. This is very good writing! I really enjoyed this and some of your phrases were really excellent. I particularly loved 'tremulously exhausted'. Very well done!