Wednesday, 14 May 2014

Joshua's 100 Word Challenge

“A kid has been kidnapped and the police are at the house that the kid is being held,”  said the news reporter. The cops said the the kidnappers were armed with deadly weapons, the police has new technology that they can hear what the kidnappers are saying inside. “The cops are saying that some words sound like a foreign language.” The police advanced to the house with the swat team and the kidnappers started shooting at the cops so the cops started shooting back. The cops got in the house and killed the kidnappers they searched the house and found that the kid wasn't there….

1 comment:

  1. Well done, Joshua, on a very good 100 Word Challenge. A great opener, immediately using dialogue to interest your readers.

    Your contemporary, relaxed style of writing suited the prompt very well.

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