Wednesday, 14 May 2014

Seyahs 100 wc

The soft morning light hit my pale skin. As my eyelids separated I realised a group of unrecognizable men surrounding me. Their mysterious voices echoed throughout the elderly warehouse. Some of the words sounded like a foreign language. An uncountable amount of thoughts flickered through my young brain. “Hello?,” I whispered. The men immediately turned their heads in concern. They began to talk among themselves in a language I was unaware of. “I need my family,” I cried. As I began to lose hope a door opened and in walked my Dad. “Daddy whats going on,” I asked
“I’m sorry darling but…. i’m part of the FBI,” he replied

1 comment:

  1. A great entry into this week’s 100 WC Seyah! What great ideas. You have used the prompt well. Your sentences are well written and not too long. I am planning on sharing your work with my class. Keep up your writing.