Thursday, 12 June 2014

Lewis' Hundred Word Challenge.

The construction workers were moving the giant chocolate egg with their crane. The egg was being moved to the art museum where it would be presented to the public. The crane was making weird squeaky sounds, the crane couldn't handle the weight of the giant egg it snapped the egg plummeted and hit the ground and cracked open. The top of the egg had snapped off and the delicious insides flowed out onto the ground. The construction workers rushed and got a more powerful crane and maneuvered it into place, even though it was broken it would have to do.

1 comment:

  1. Lynda (Team 100WC) from Hartlepool16 June 2014 at 19:50

    Oh dear. I bet someone got into trouble for that. A lovely story that worked very well with the prompt photograph. The sentence starting 'The crane was making ....' might need some punctuation. Read it out loud to yourself and see what you think. Well done for taking part in the challenge this week.

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