Friday, 6 June 2014

Seyah's 100wc

My friend and I stood outside the rustic gateway which was disguised in mold. The cold wind echoed throughout the abandon farm forcing goosebumps to rise on our silky skin. After traveling through this suspicious trail I noticed the black clouds that hovered above us. “Are you sure were walking in the right direction ?” I asked.
“I’m sure” he replied. All of a sudden the rain flowed out of the uncontrollable clouds. A cautious sound was made in the bushes which sent fear to my heart. As I turned a man was running towards us with death in his eyes...

1 comment:

  1. I love this wee story. You have used the words given to you well and have created a story which is descriptive and therefore vivid and easily imaginable. You have punctuated it very well and the ellipsis at the end is timely... I am left wondering "what an earth is happening?". Thank you for entering 100wc this week - sorry for my late comment.