Friday, 6 June 2014

Xiaomin's 100WC

One beautiful day my friend and I ambled to the park, down the road. Mya my friend was running too fast she tripped over a thick branch and she fell on the hard concrete ground. I helped her get off from the ground and we kept walking. We ran to the gateway of the park and the cold breeze rushes past my face. I could see kids hanging from monkey bars and parents scattered throughout the park. A black dog ran up to Mya and leaped onto her. The sun was going down and it was getting late, me and Mya stumbled home and mum made us smooth hot chocolate.

1 comment:

  1. What a wonderfully descriptive story, and I love your use of words like "ambled", very nice writing. Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.